Well, neither score sheet noted acetaldehyde so maybe it was just the yeast and the level was normal for this style. I got dinged on carbonation (duh, yeah, I'll plan ahead better next time), clarity (which pisses me off because I know its damned clear), too sweet for style (agreed). I'm happy with it and will eventually brew it again with several tweaks. Even with decent carbonation now I have almost zero head retention. So I guess I'll work something in there like carapils or wheat (??). And I need to dry it out more.