Understand what you are using each ingredient for. For instance: You would use sugar to dry the beer out, but then you have cara pils malt, which is for adding body. Do you want the beer dry? Or are you trying to add body? You should probably drop one or the other.
As far as hops go: You look like you are focusing on bittterness more than hop flavor/aroma. Is that what you want? If not, move some of the hops to the end of the boil.
If you don't explain what style you are going for you do not communicate properly what you are trying to accomplish. That's really what makes styles important.